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Firstly, which one do you think looks better?

Secondly, have at it.

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:iconwhodrewthis:
Classic example of MyNameIsMad's playful style; the bushes and trees are practically characters unto themselves. Can't say I'm always a fan of illustrated scenery shots, but this one feels like something's going to happen, like it's literally the first panel of a comic and someone's going to run out the door of the cabin covered in bees or something. Oooh, the potential. :P

Of the two, I prefer the image on the left; somehow, the right image's combination of dot/stipple shading and grayscale just kinda makes my brain go floppy. It just feels... off. But that's just me; opinions will differ on that.
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:iconamystikal:
Both of these are really great, but the second one is my favorite. The shading makes the picture feel deeper and more interesting, and makes the picture more pleasing to the eye. The shading does a great job at separating the cabin from the plants and surrounding environment, but at the same time the illustration gives you a feeling of confinement. There's great layering in the second one, and with a limited amount of colors in black and white, I think you've done a great job at illustrating different shades of gray and black to show all kinds of de-saturated color!

I guess...
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:iconcameron627:
I like the third one better =D

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:iconcorny63:
I think the second one looks better.
:iconcatz1313:
-fails at crits- so i have none :[
But I like the second beeeccaaauuusssee the different values in the foliage help bring out the house and give the picture more depth :]

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:iconpumpkinetics:
Hold on, I'm looking...

Okay, so far i've got 3 berries in the bush on the left, 4 in the bush on the right. What else?

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:iconcunningfox:
The second one looks like it has more depth because of the colored foliage. As for crits the one thing I can say is when I first look at the image and try to look around it my eye keeps coming back to that unimportant light sticking out. If it was pulled back under the roof it would be way less distracting from the house/lawn.

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:iconhiurro:
There is only one discernible difference, and seeing as some people have missed it I would say they are about the same.

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thanks!

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:iconmynameismad:
thank you!

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